DPS Feedback

Ellie- I really like the setting and the mise en scene of the image like the use of the cigarette and the brick wall, it gives off the right impression and attitude of the magazine. The use of speech marks are good because they draw attention. The font on 'Dee' is good as it looks sophisticated and shows dynamic within the page. Improvements - better font on title as it looks quite simple.

Elle- I really like the layout of the page and how the image takes up the full page, it stands out and straight away shows the audience what the article is about. I love the pull quote as the title and how you have enlarged the speech marks to stand out. The fonts are consistent and it shows good continuity to your other products.

Jamie- There is good continuity between all of your products. You have used a good image which reflects the idea of the magazine. The pull quotes are outstanding! it looks really professional. Very good layout that is easy to read however there is too much writing.