Contents page feedback

jamie's comment;

the contents page is busy and full of good information and instructive notes about the magazine. it looks appealing and it leads your eyes around the page with all the different things going on, the font and pictures all match and suit really well. nothing stands out for the wrong reasons or doesn't fit in and i really like the side red box with all of the names of the artists and bands. i also really like the highlighted letters to indicate importance  on the first text box you need to space the writing so its not over flowing on to each other!

james's comments;

I like how full your contents page is and the images that you have chosen and i think they look pretty realistic. The use of different colours on you page also make you focus on different sections of the page. The things that you could improve is that you could do something to the contents heading because at the moment there's a bit of plain black space there that could be filled.

Kiera's comments:

I like the title and how it stands out .You've carried on the style of the text which is good because there's consistency throughout. Everything is in line so it doesn't look scruffy at all, The band index is a nice idea and the layout is looks realistic. Where you've put the contents name there's a lot of black, so maybe you could add something in there to fill the space. Well done!

Teacher's comments:
In order to improve your contents page, make the 'Contents' title bigger so it takes up most of the space and put the 'Buzz' logo where the date is. Make the date smaller or totally remove it as it is already featured on the front cover. Use original images as well as your main image to make it more original, you may need to change the artists to ones you have made up.